Feed Back From Partner and Other Audiences:
Feedback from Dawn Main:
Saturday, January. 24, 2015 v I loved your story! I was engaged through out. v You paced yourself really well! v Like you said you can add more artifacts to your intro. v Maybe add more information about the cat that reached out to you and why you couldn't get him. Why you needed a female cat.
http://picklesandstories.wikispaces.com/Memory+Box
Feed Back From Partner and Other Audiences:
Feedback from Dawn Main:
Saturday, January. 24, 2015
v I loved your story! I was engaged through out.
v You paced yourself really well!
v Like you said you can add more artifacts to your intro.
v Maybe add more information about the cat that reached out to you and why you couldn't get him. Why you needed a female cat.
Feedback Sheet:
Link to my final video:
http://www.apprennet.com/exercises/be2lt345--o-dot-d-1-dot-4-memory-box-peer-review